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Boy eyes

Boy eyes

Train poem

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Boy's eyes waiting on you to arrive
Anticipate the train with you on it
A stranger to me
A special bond to him

Mother’s eyes
Let love be the way
A stranger to me
Anticipation can let a crime be

A flood of passengers
Feet scrolling over tiled floors
Foreign languages gently simmer 
To the gentle tap tap tap of heels

Boy and mother standing still
Stran…

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