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Concave Bench

Concave Bench

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people walking on the street during daytime
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I land myself on the concave bench

It bulges and retracts

Like anger in a child

The tide that swells before

It fully goes out

Closer and further by design

Pulls the sand dunes

with the breeze and the beach

changes shape.

Broken escalator on the other side

and the tide of commuters clock in

swelling the platform spilling out

as th…

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