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I open the window

I open the window

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Dec 27, 2023
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Cold air rushes in 

Makes itself comfortable at my feet 

Before it starts hanging in the air 

It wraps around my chest 

My torso 

And heart starts aching,

all fingers get limp.  

Cold wind rushes past 

Ruffles leaves outside my window 

Lets them take a short flight 

And they gather around the mans coat 

Circle him in their dance 

Before they fall 

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