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It Would Rain Forever

It Would Rain Forever

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Jun 05, 2024
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Two days and nights

Rain fell and fell

And didn’t stop

Rain drops big and small

Heavier than normal

Piercing like needles

shallow puddles

expanding bubbles

draining the land.

Two days and nights

no one dared go out

stayed indoors

watching rain fall

drench and hound

beat up fields

whip the mountains

as it’s pelting down

ransacking every stone.

Two days and nights

the…

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