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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Wonderful! I'm loving this shift to a darker tone in the poetry recently. It's working really well and adding an instantly gripping and mysterious atmosphere to everything. Well done... 😎

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Optiskeptic's avatar

Wow, Pilgrim! The arc is so assured. I feel reticence to face grief and yet accepting it produces a stunningly positive ending. ❤️

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