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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

PINK FLOYD

Back in SUMMER '68, we used to hang around on the cobbled streets outside one IBIZA BAR and then another, sitting there with our PAINT BOX, making caricatures for the tourists.

They were THE HAPPIEST DAYS OF OUR LIVES.

We'd usually have to RUN LIKE HELL, though, as soon as they saw the pictures.

Because the truth is, we weren't even artists. We just thought it would be a quick and easy way to make some MONEY.

And it was... 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Run for their money... this made me laugh.

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Thanks! It was another fun one this, with so many great songs to choose from. And then I just went ahead and used the lyrics of 'Money' as the main inspiration! "It's a gas... Grab that cash with both hands and make a stash!" Haha... 😎

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Treasa's avatar

Oh Christ, these are just getting better.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

They are, aren’t they?

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

That's very kind, thank you! I've been really enjoying putting these together. We're into the final ten now! 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Somehow we’ll see the month until the end with this.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Prefab Sprout

Johnny Johnny

If you don’t love me

Don’t sing

Hey Manhattan

The sound of crying

Looking for Atlantis

Enchanted

I remember that

Life’s a miracle

Horsin’ around

’Til the cows come home

We let the stars go

When love breaks down

The king of rock ’n’ roll

Couldn’t bear to be special

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Treasa's avatar

'Horsin' around til the cows come home,' hah! Brilliant.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Paddy McAloon has some top class lyrics and titles. He’s Irish after all!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Ahh, 'The King of Rock 'n' Roll'. That's one of those commonly misheard songs. Like ABBA's 'Super Trouper'! Haha... 😎

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Gordon Schenck's avatar

Pino Daniele

( All but one title in first version translated to english in the second poem)

Il Mare di Pino Daniele

Chi tene 'o mare

A testa in giu

Sotto 'o sole

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Continueremo a navigare

Il pianeta delle parole

Continueremo a navigare

Alla ricerca dell'acqua della vita*

Se mi vuoi

Resta... resta cu'mme

E se amore sarà

Continueremo a navigare

Non abbiamo bisogno di parole

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Sotto 'o sole

A testa in giu

Chi tene 'o mare

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Pino Daniele's Sea

Who holds the sea

Upside down

Under the sun

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We sail on

The planet of words

We will continue to navigate

Searching for the water of life

If you want me

Stay... stay with me

And if it will be love

We will continue sailing

We don't need words

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Under the sun

Upside down

Who holds the sea

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* There was no Italian language version so I translated the English title into Italian.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Utterly beautiful!!!

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Treasa's avatar

What an 3-liner at the end, amazing.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

I have missed commenting here. This is beautiful. Would this be our first non English piece?

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Dick Whyte's avatar

Today I chose PJ Harvey, and haver written a tanka sequence :-)

-: Prayers at the Gate: For PJ Harvey :-

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I.

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the river

happy and bleeding—

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water,

.

the colour of the earth.

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II.

.

the wind

dances on the mountain—

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lying in the sun,

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a place

called home.

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III.

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the sky lit up the garden—

the nightingale

waits,

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i’ll be waiting,

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joy.

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IV.

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down by the water

a noiseless noise—

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(grow grow grow)

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this is love.

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<3

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Dick Whyte's avatar

And here it is properly paginated: https://substack.com/@publicdomainpoets/note/c-56502505 :-)

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Fotini Masika's avatar

This is perfection! 🖤

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Dick Whyte's avatar

Aw thanks Fotini - you're too kind 🙏🏻

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Great poem for a great artist!

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Dick Whyte's avatar

Aw thanks! Yeah, I was so glad I remembered her :-) Lots of great ones to choose from for P.

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Treasa's avatar

This really fits with my day. Beautiful.

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Dick Whyte's avatar

Aw lovely - so glad!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Again, this is another one where the song titles practically disappear behind the magic of the story. Magnificent! 😎

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Pixies

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Palace of the Brine

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Gigantic snakes

blown away

on graveyard hill.

All the saints

might as well be gone

down to the well.

Monkey gone to heaven.

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Hey, Mr. Grieves,

who’s more sorry now?

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

We’re entering dark realms with your poems these last days! But I know you’re looking after your readers so not too worried…yet! I’m not scared yet I tell myself.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

There is always light at the end of the tunnel. Or so the say...

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Treasa's avatar

Monkey gone to heaven gonna be stuck in my head all eve. This is great.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Hahahahahahaha

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Treasa's avatar

PRINCE

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Coffee grinder

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Soft & wet purple rain. One of

your tears, diamonds & pearls.

Starfish & coffee cinnamon girl,

young & beautiful under

a cherry moon.

La, la, la means I love you.

Chaos & disorder, tick, tick,

BANG!

https://youtu.be/TG4PqmShvHI?feature=shared

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Prince would be proud! Rain, pearls and spice topped with a cherry moon! Only you and Prince!

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Treasa's avatar

Watched one of his live concerts on TV recently, that man had some energy and he's super bendy!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

He's amazing! Such talent! I love that interview where he says when he is on concert the mic is on and he sings! I need to find it now.

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Treasa's avatar

He's my go to when I get sick of all my other Spotify playlists.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Very versatile music. I remember George Michael speaking about Prince and how prolific he was but not only that there's quality. And I say that without being a massive fan. I just respect him for all the music and the fact that he does sing. He was an artist on so many levels.

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Treasa's avatar

and all the amazing songs he gave away, 'nothing compares to you' 'manic monday'

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Absolutely. Amazing performer and songwriter. A lot of people don't realise what an incredible guitar player he was, too. And not only that. He played lots of other instruments as well. On his first album, in particular, he plays literally all the instruments on it! All 27! 😎

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Treasa's avatar

When he looks directly into the camera, brilliant. The man was a genius.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Direct, to the point! I mean why not, he was a genius! I love that clip. Came across it a few months ago and laugh each time. Imagine now when most stuff is sampled, auto tuned etc.

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Yes! Prince! That's a great selection of songs and a nice arrangement of them... 😎

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Treasa's avatar

Thanks Chris. Roll on Q day. We might as well just call it Queen day right here and now.

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Haha! Well my Queen story is ready and will be going up very shortly! 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

hahahhahahahaha yes what was I thinking? Queen all the way! One way or another.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

I was betting on Portishead for your day's choice, Treasa, but you surprised me with Prince. Wow! Really love the feeling of it!

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Treasa's avatar

Ah man! I panic picked. I still have Dummy on tape somewhere. Wandering Star ❤️

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

I love how we think a certain person will cover a certain artist. I thought you’d do Bowie… hahahahahhaa don’t ask me why. I was so wrong! Part of the surprise element. I have to say I didn’t think Treasa would do Prince either. It was a lovely surprise.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Yeah, I know what you mean, you certainly surprised me today with Queen Latifah :)

This is fun!!!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Hahahahaha I thought I needed to get something different. I love her name and I think she’s pretty cool. I was certain someone would pick Queen. Then again, no one picked Bowie, until much later I think. I am trying to get over that! Everyday, I think of artists I should have covered. Like what letter does Terence Trent D’Arby fall under? I’d like to see a poem about him. He’s changed name now, Sananda Maitreya right?

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Fotini Masika's avatar

I still wonder why didn't I choose Johnny Cash or or why nobody else did. There are too many artists to fit into a single day.

I didn't know Terence Trent D’Arby changed name, but oh, what memories that name brings...

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Yeah he did.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Yes no one picked Cash either.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

The Police

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So lonely

next to you,

Roxanne.

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Don’t stand so close to me

walking on the moon,

demolition man.

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Every little thing she does is magic

on any other day

walking in your footsteps.

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Every breath you take,

it’s alright for you —

de do do do, de da da da.

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When the world is running down,

you make the best of what’s still around.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

You picked the cherries for this one! Reads beautifully!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thank you, WP, I'm still having fun even though I'm falling behind!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Don’t worry! Do what you can and you may go back if you want to as well! We’re happy to have you here and contribute!

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