23 Comments
User's avatar
Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Black star

.

Black Star

I'll see the light tonight

Rising force

.

Brothers

Far beyond the sun

Save our love

Crystal ball

Baroque and roll

See you in hell

.

Like an angel

Blue

You don't remember, I'll never forget

.

by Yngwie Malmsteen

Expand full comment
Darienne's avatar

Y is for the always young Mr Neil YOUNG

Hangin’ on a limb

~

I am a child

Heart of gold

It’s so hard to wait

~

Just singing a song

Down by the river

My my, Hey hey

~

Ain’t it the truth

Falling from above

Expecting to fly

~

Night song

Wayward wind

High flying’ bird

~

Natural beauty

Touch the night

Till the morning comes

~

Are you passionate?

Beautiful bluebird

See the sky about to rain

~

Looking forward

A dream that can last

Better than silver and gold

~

Be the rain

Little wing

Long may you run

Expand full comment
Kate's avatar

I adore this

Expand full comment
Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Fantastic! And he's playing at Glastonbury this year, too! 😎👍

Expand full comment
Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

A cinematic journey! It’s a slow motion nature documentary about birds and the earth! David Attenborough style with a big g dash of poetry! Loved this very much!

Expand full comment
Gordon Schenck's avatar

The Yardbirds

Please don't tell me 'bout the news

Too much monkey business

Stealing, stealing

Sun is shining

Still I'm sad

Knowing that I'm losing you

Think about it

I'm a man

I've been wrong

I ain't done wrong

I'm confused

Dazed and confused

I ain't got you

I can't make it your way

Knowing

Most Likely You'll Go Your Way (And I'll Go Mine)

What do you want

Who do you love

Louise

I wish you would

Love me like I love you

Never mind

Pretty girl

Stroll on

Expand full comment
Kate's avatar

Oh the ache! 💔

Expand full comment
Darienne's avatar

Phenomenal Gordon!!🙌🏻

Expand full comment
Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

100%! You got this Gordon! Wow what a gorgeous Song title poem!

Expand full comment
Rachel Schiller's avatar

Yes

Owner of a lonely heart

yours is no disgrace

Love will find a way

It can happen

I would have waited forever

I've seen all good people

run through the light

leave it

close to the edge

Expand full comment
Kate's avatar

Beautiful …

Expand full comment
Darienne's avatar

Lovely Rachel🫶🏻

Expand full comment
Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Owner of a lonely heart hits home every time! What a banger!

Expand full comment
Lyriquediscorde's avatar

Nobody's Diary

In my room

midnight

only you

Softly over

Mr. Blue

sweet thing,

Don't go

Walk away from love

(songs from Yaz)

Expand full comment
Darienne's avatar

Did Yazoo last year! “Midnight” is an all time favourite song. This is lovely 🫶🏻

Expand full comment
Lyriquediscorde's avatar

I'd love to read your Yazoo one!

Expand full comment
Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

You can find it in the archive of the song title poems Lyriquediscorde.

Expand full comment
Kate's avatar

The loose sash in the middle that is “softly over” … sublime

Expand full comment
Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Nobody's Diary is a beautiful first line! Thank you Lyrique!

Expand full comment
Chris J. Franklin's avatar

YOU ME AT SIX (Poem)

THE TRUTH IS A TERRIBLE THING,

HARD TO SWALLOW,

YOU'VE MADE YOUR BED, LIVED A LIE,

THE CONSEQUENCE, FIREWORKS, BROTHER,

RECKLESS, WILD ONES, CRASH... 😎

Expand full comment
Lisa Andradez's avatar

Years and Years

.

Its a sin

All for you

The edge of glory

Rendevous

Sooner or later

Sweet talker

Karma

Come alive

If you're over me

A second to midnight

Hallelujah

Hypnotised

Expand full comment
Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

More than one way to read these particular three lines

"If you're over me

A second to midnight

Hallelujah". You've really accomplished a great piece with these 1-3 word lines Lisa!

Expand full comment
Kate's avatar

Y is for Yusuf (Cat Steven’s)

But I might die tonight

Miles from nowhere

Bitterblue ruins fill my eyes

It’s a supa (dupa) life

How can I tell you

I think I see the light

It’s so good, if I laugh

King of trees, the boy who knew to climb walls

Home in the sky

Can’t keep it in how good it feels

Silent sunlight

Sweet scarlet into white

On the road to find out

View from the top

I see a road train on a hill

Freezing steel ghost town

Image of hell

The wind changes IV time

Blackness of the night

Moonshadow

A bad night,

a bad penny

Can’t keep it in

How can I tell you?

Lilywhite, oh very young

morning has broken

Tuesday’s dead

Take the world apart

Ready Music!

I’m gonna be king

(Sorry I am late to the Y Party - but I do love this challenge)

Expand full comment