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Train Poem

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Aug 25, 2024
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A new view
the same departure
a train discontinued
a platform not visited before

The sun has removed its cloak
and as the train leaves the station
light pierces 
the glass window

as a sun beam follows
a wave until it reaches the shore. 
A slight curve
and a longing is never cured.

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photo of brown train track at sunset
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