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Jorgen Winther's avatar

Wonderful!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Thank you Jorgen!

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

This has such a clever sentiment, Pilgrim. Very nice!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Thank you Rod!

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Darienne's avatar

Ufff! Taken wind from sails here Pilgrim. How many rugs have been pulled out from under me over the years, so many small things missed. Yet the itch to twitch the pen and let it all out ever present.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

You go Darienne! That’s the spirit!

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Wow, beautiful poem

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Sarah's avatar

This poem made me cry 🙏❣️ I FEEL THESE WORDS to my bones, it’s medicine to read this, thank you for sharing🙏

This feels so appropriate for the Fall season; for me it spoke to my hungry inner artist who wants big things and to make things happen, but I feeeel the need to be discerning and balanced with these creative dreams.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

It was written early on but glad to see it has this autumnal feel to it for you. It felt like a very tiny piece of writing so am thrilled to get such big emotions out. Thank you Sarah!

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LeeAnn Pickrell's avatar

I really like this. It is the small things. I love the images.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

🖤 🖤 🖤

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

The last stanza especially grabbed me, but the whole thing is lovely.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Thank you! Great having you read my poems!

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