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Had to do this one quickly without thinking haha - otherwise I would have lost my nerve. Thankfully a few of mine were written based on very obscure small NZ bands, so it wasn't too hard to figure out how to contact one of them. So letter sent - I'll let you know if I get a reply. I sent it to Alistair Galbraith, from A Handful of Dust;

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Hey Alistair,

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You don't know me, but I have been a long time fan of your music. And some 25 years ago (or so) when you opened for Keiji Haino in Auckland, my friends and I gave you a cassette of our band on the first night - and then on the second night you remembered us, and had listened to the cassette, and gave some lovely feedback. It's been a really special memory for us ever since.

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Anyway - I was recently taking part in a poetry challenge, where we were tasked to create poems out of song titles. And one of the bands I chose was A Handful of Dust. Then at the end of the challenge, one of the follow up prompts was to send a letter to one of the artists, to share the poem and let them know what an impact their music has had on us, and I chose you. Many thanks for all the great music over the years, and I hope you enjoy my humble effort at writing some poetry using song titles from Handful of Dust. Here's the poem, written as a sequence of 3 free-tanka;

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-: The Colour of Grasshoppers: A Dance :-

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I. first dance

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in a handful

of dust—

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i am god's finger,

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and the sun

is not named

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II. second dance

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dialogues

of the dead—

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in the house of voluntary poverty,

we will blow

our best

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III. third dance

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come,

breath upon these slain

that they may live—

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in the city of the sun,

a brief apology

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All the best,

Richard Whyte

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<3

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

I'm stuck... not sure whether to choose Wham, Hozier, ABBA, Youssou N'Dour. This is a tough one.

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