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Bill Ferguson πŸ‡¨πŸ‡¦'s avatar

A Change of View

Adam stood on the deck of the boat gazing down the Thames River.

β€œIt is hard to believe that this is where most of the famous British explorers started their journeys.”

Beth closed her eyes. β€œI can picture it now. All those little ships being laden with enough supplies for a 6 month journey. They must have been masters at doling out just the right amount of food so that they had enough for a return trip.”

β€œIt must have been a magical time,” added Adam.

β€œNot really,” explained the Captain. β€œWe have grown to see the world in rich colours but it was anything but that back then. Dirty and grimy with things looking less than clean. It was a different world.” He regarded Adam and Beth closely. β€œWhere you are going is much better than those times. At least in prison you will have 3 square meals a day, some heat in the winter. Some cooling in the summer. All nice and comfortable instead of being beheaded for your crimes.”

β€œThank God for that,” Beth stated quietly.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

So who's going to prison here? Both Beth and Adam? I'd like to know how the captain knows all his stuff.... super curious. Thank you Bill!

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Scott MacLeod's avatar

Trust Your Gut

Edward was tired of his fellow master builders. The architects who built sleek monuments to clean, sharp angles. Row after row of rectilinear glass monoliths with washboard abs. Mirroring themselves, who generally were tall, trim, square-jawed, patrician. Clothed in stylish bespoke pinstripes. Edward was an everyman. Portly. Crinkled and rumpled, sprinkled with crumbs. Edward wanted the cityscape to reflect folks like him. Like us. He built a less exclusionary tribute to his imperfect archetype. To stand out from the lean, sterile, perfectly proportioned perpendicular superstructures. Finally, the skyline could boast a high-rise with a bit of a belly!

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Theresa Greene's avatar

The best painter uses the sky

His brush flys as He mixes and dyes

He makes our dirty little cities

Look almost even pretty

He is the greatest painter of all

The sky is His canvas,,y'all

No one can equal his paints

How much more He would give His saints

He is the creator of reds and blues

A sweep of His hand brings orange true

For the ladies, pink and blue

Every color comes from him

And they make us better humans.

Thank you , Writer Pilgrim!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Thank you Theresa! I've enjoyed the sky as a canvas metaphor. A beautiful way to describe it.

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Kate's avatar

Same sky

I don’t know where I am right now

But I look up and know that everyone I love,

Loved and will love

Is sharing the same sky

Maybe they will see these colours

Yesterday morning

Or

Tomorrow evening

Or later in the month or year or decade

Maybe they’ll think nothing of it, just another sky

But that doesn’t feel right, doesn’t hold water, doesn’t shine a light in truth

Because this same sky, that some saw yesterday and some will see tomorrow

Is art. Frame it up using the square rule of your thumb and forefinger

Blink slowly.

See it again.

See it yesterday

See it tomorrow

See it in seven years time with your arm around their shoulders and wonder in your eyes

This same sky

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