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Optiskeptic's avatar

A moment remembered and an existential agony revolving around that perfect second verse...

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Very kind, thank you Opti!

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Rolando Andrade's avatar

very powerful. A punch in the brain

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

This sounds like a wake up thing. I hope it's that and not too hurtful haha! Thank you Rolando!

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Lisa Fransson's avatar

Such an atmospheric poem.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Thank you Lisa!

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