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roger hawcroft's avatar

Celtic Woman

My Homeland

Is an Ancient Land

Which I love and honour

Though not the Garden of Eden

A paradise is Moorlough Shore

And County Down

And many an Enchanted Way

On a Long Journey Home

Faith’s Song

Tara’s Tune

And Danny Boy

Remind me of Fields of Gold

Over the rainbow

Will welcome my going home

As gently as Ae Fond Kiss

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Excellent job. I'm familiar with some of these songs, but not all of them. Irish music is great, though, and I'll definitely be exploring these more... 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Wow, amazing! Thank you non and welcome to the challenge! Hope to see you bring some more tunes and poems in the next days!

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Treasa's avatar

One for the Irish. Is breá liom é!

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

Cheap Trick

Oh, Candy. Hello there.

So good to see you.

If you want my love, surrender.

Stop this game. Don’t be cruel.

I want you to want me.

Reach out, southern girl.

This California man

Is gonna raise hell.

Ain’t that a shame?

Come on, come on.

I must be dreamin’.

The dream police are near.

I hear voices.

Be my flame.

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

That is superb. Well done, Rod! 😎

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

Thanks, Chris!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Thank you Rod! Amazing poem!

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

Thanks, Pilgrim! This is a great idea!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

COUNTING CROWS

It had been A LONG DECEMBER, trying to sell Christmas trees not far from PALISADES PARK.

Just HANGINAROUND, TIME AND TIME AGAIN, hoping someone ROUND HERE would buy one, while we got more and more BLACK AND BLUE from lugging them around on our shoulders.

After FOUR DAYS, we were ready to give up. It was obvious we wouldn't be living the HIGH LIFE we'd dreamed of, or taking that planned HOLIDAY IN SPAIN anytime soon.

We'd been UP ALL NIGHT wrapping trees in plastic for nothing.

And after they'd stopped laughing, that's when ALL MY FRIENDS told me what the problem was.

They weren't Christmas trees at all. They were some sort of red maple.

But then we were both COLORBLIND... 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Wow! I love this! I cannot understand where you get these from! Great flow, fast and fun! The three F's according to Chris!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Haha! The three F's. That's brilliant. This is actually my favourite band, so I was really hoping this one would turn out well. It's amazing how just looking at song titles, and picking out two or three together, can cause a story to begin to form. It's almost like using them as Prompts, I guess. I'm glad you enjoyed it... 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

I love what you are coming up with. Each one of you posting creates little stories out of titles and give new life to amazing creations.

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Thanks! It's been really great fun. I'm hoping I can get all 26 done. It would be amazing to have a full collection from A-Z. But we'll see... 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

No pressure! You can also post on your site and on Notes as you are doing. And if you can't do one day, you can always get back to it later and do it. Or just skip if too much else going on. Thank you for sharing your enthusiasm!

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Treasa's avatar

This is a fantastic piece even without the song titles, so clever and witty. Some fairy lights and tinsel and I bet Santa wouldn't even know the difference!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Haha! That is true. Usually, I can hardly see the tree underneath once I've got all the stuff on it. Thanks for reading and thanks for the wonderful comment... 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Aaaw!!!

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

Just fantastic, Chris!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Thanks Rod! I'm glad you enjoyed it... 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

The Clash

Bankrobber

I fought the law

Police on my back

Deny

English civil war

Stay free

London Calling

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Treasa's avatar

See now all I can picture in my mind is The Clash in Cardigans!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Thank you!

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Rod Bluhm's avatar

Very nice!

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Fotini Masika's avatar

THE CURE

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Disintegration

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At Night

All Cats Are Grey

In Between Days

Prayers for Rain

A Night Like This

Pictures Of You

Shiver and Shake

Close to Me

Torture

A Short Term Effect

Seventeen Seconds

A Thousand Hours

One Hundred Years

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Yes, I was hoping for the Cure! You nailed it! Wow, Wow, Wow!

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Fotini Masika's avatar

I could not help myself, Cure come naturally to me :)

Oh dear... yesterday was such a weird day! And when I opened my laptop at night to check on SPAWN there were already 140 comments. I panicked!!!!!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Listen, it was quiet for 30 minutes, just two of us or three and then boom suddenly there are so many comments. Don't panic! This morning I had another 40 comments! Likes.... Join whenever you can! You respond to what you want and know and feel like!

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Fotini Masika's avatar

I will in my time. But you should know... when it comes to fight or flight... I usually fly away, little bird I am :)

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Hey, no skipping class!

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Fotini Masika's avatar

I'm too old for this!

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Treasa's avatar

This is great! I love The Cure, saw them just the once at a festival back in the noughties. My friends all got pissed and fell asleep so I was all by my lonesome lost in a forest of drunks ;)

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Oh no.... the fact that people need to get pissed to appreciate music, art or a concert! But there you go... maybe that in itself was worth the experience. You still remember!

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Fotini Masika's avatar

I used to go to gigs all by myself for many years. Mainly because my friends weren't interested in the music I liked. A good thing, I guess - no one around to piss me off :)

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Omg! Me too! Then they’d complain why I didn’t take them along…

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Oh, what are friends for...

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Excellent work. I was very close to doing The Cure myself, but I had to do Counting Crows because they're my favourite band. I love 'Lullaby', it's one of my favourite songs to play on guitar. I may post my version of it on here one day... 😎

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Fotini Masika's avatar

I would love to see your version, Chris!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Thanks! I'm very interested in putting some music on here now they have the new audio Tools. I'm just figuring out the best way to do it. It will probably have to be a separate publication. But I'll let you all know where it is, when it appears! 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Start testing! Sea has a song a week. Some of it is linked to youtube links.

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Yes, it's all about eperimenting on here. That is the key. I'm not actually sure if you're allowed to post cover songs. I'm still looking into it. I would assume it's okay, as long as you've significantly changed them. And as long as you're not charging money for them. I guess to be safe, though, those ones may have to just be a quick 30 second clip on Notes! Haha... 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

SPAWN question this is.

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roger hawcroft's avatar

Thank you, Treasa, so do I - the place, the people and the music ...

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Treasa's avatar

Christine and the Queens

And the…

Tears can be

so soft,

angels crying

in my bed.

Body safe

and holy,

ugly, pretty.

I disappear

in your arms,

lick the light out.

Had to go with this clip from 03/05/2016.

Just amazing live!

https://youtu.be/5JoKzOYBuwo?si=0WaR5CPUo4pyaAsk

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Thank you Treasa, inspiring lines and I love how you created this flow. What an ending! Christine is a great performer and artist, you extracted pure gold in these lines.

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Beautifully done... 😎

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Treasa, song titles are your thing! Every poem so far is absolutely great!

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Treasa's avatar

Thanks Fotini, it eases the guilt if I don't write anything else that day.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

Girls Just Want to Have Fun, no guilt, please :)

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Writing without writing!

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Treasa's avatar

Thanks! I'm enjoying rummaging through Spotify and YouTube for this challenge. Bring on D-day :)

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

The Cars (a sonnet)

Candy-O,

let's go--

it's all I can do.

You're all I've got tonight,

moving in stereo

since I held you.

Good times roll,

lust for kicks,

don't cha stop--

I'm in touch with your world.

You can't hold on too long,

misfit kid.

Touch and go.

Don't tell me no.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Wow, what a piece! Thank you! We had Oh Candy and now Candy o... love the sounds of pattern and the rhyme-no-rhyme feel. Wonderful! Thank you for being here Jonathan and sharing your Cars playlist! "Let's go"

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

That was fun -- thanks for the prompt!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

You are welcome. Do come back and visit. Aiming to go through the alphabet this month.

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Fotini Masika's avatar

This is so great, Jonathan!!!

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Thanks, Fotini. I made it into a full-fledged post and playlist: https://jopomojo.substack.com/p/the-cars-a-sonnet

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

I have their song in my head since this post and the song wasn’t even in your poem.

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Jonathan Potter's avatar

Which song?

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PS Lorcan's avatar

Car Song

Carry on Wayward Son, Child of Vision (remastered)

you gotta be Cruel To Be Kind sometimes

Can’t Be Touched in Candyland, Heatmiser, 


Cut Your Hair before you hit the Pavement, punk,

Ça Plane Pour Moi, but


pack The Cramps for the Poison Ivy


Take Candy (demo), President, Confusion can be

a Cold Hard Bitch, and a dime for Calling Hong Kong

see Chewbacca, Supernova, and visit

Caroline, Concrete Blonde, there are Cowboys In Hong Kong too

Said Red Rider, Red Rider, c’mon over

Take a telescope for the cold, Cold Rain

In the Screaming Trees ‘round Creation Lake

And don’t forget your Celebrity Skin, Cherry Lips,


Crazy On You looks good, like a


Crash Course in Brain Surgery

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Thank you! Cowboys in Hong Kong! Who’s the artist?

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PS Lorcan's avatar

Thank you. That was fun! Cowboys in Hong Kong is by Red Rider (also did Lunatic Fringe).

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Dick Whyte's avatar

Pretty late to this one, but I thought I might go back and do some I missed. Here is my entry for "c" - Cat Power;

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-: Ode to Poetry: For Cat Power :-

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"Divine shell, your song." (Sappho)

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Empty shell

Speak to me:

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Sun!

Breathless

Fire—

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Moon!

Up and gone—

Stay!

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Horizon!

Against the wind—

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Water & air:

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The greatest

Names,

Shaking paper!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

You’ve got this! I love that you go back and fill in the missing letters! You know you don’t have to. Thank you!

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Dick Whyte's avatar

Haha - cheers! Oh yeah, absolutely - was just feeling inspired last night and it was still a while to go until Q was up, so went backwards :-)

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