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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

IRAKERE

Feliz compleanos

Happy birthday

El tata

Dad

Ciento anos de juventad

One hundred years of youth

Este camino largo

This long road

Lo que va a pasar

What's going to happen

Por Romper el Loco

To break the crazy

Gira Gira

Spin spin

Baila mi ritmo

Dance my rhythm

Que se sepa yo soy de la Habana

Let it be known I am from Havana

El volcan del caribe

The volcano of the caribbean

Bailando asi

Dancing like this

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Brilliant with the Spanish and the translations. Thank you Gordon!

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Very nice. That is a band I've never heard of. But it is one I will definitely be looking up! 😎

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

INSPIRAL CARPETS

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This Is How It Feels

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Here comes the flood,

irresistible force

dragging me down.

Half way there

inside my head

bitches brew

memories of you.

Further away

sun don’t shine—

I don’t want to go blind,

please be cruel.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nt4SNfcd72s&ab_channel=InspiralCarpets

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You've been in the archives! I didn't know their name, but I remember the song! Amazing, Fotini! Absolutely, brilliant, each line feeds into the next, a collective dragging down!

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May 9·edited May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

You know many more songs, I'm sure. 90s rule!

Thank you for your kind words, and keep up with the beat real wild child!

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Great flow to this poem and a really catching tune to pep me up this morn.

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Glad you like it, Treasa, have a nice day!

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And.... I wonder if this inspired Caesars Palace with Jerk It Out. Too similar in my view.

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Could be... I haven't listened to any other of Ceasars Palace songs to tell you the truth so I don't know...

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Just listen to that one and let me know what you think. Sounds very much like Dragging me down.

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Fantastic. Haven't thought about them for a long time. They were the band Noel Gallagher used to be a roadie for, before he joined Oasis... 😎

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Thanks Chris!!!

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May 9·edited May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

An air for the wind

(Song titles from “Our Endless Numbered Days” by Iron and Wine)

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On your wings, wind, we arrive and we leave

swooping down upon the teeth in the grass

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rising up past the sunset soon forgotten

naked as we came on this passing afternoon.

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Cinder and smoke rise from the tamped-down fire

each shifting night, a fever dream of being trapped

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and tied, free until they cut me down, chanting

rising up in a blizzard of sounds, a radio war

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of hissing dissonance and faintly heard lyrics

“love” and some verses lost as the wind rises again

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and we leave and arrive on your wings.

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Songs:

On Your Wings

Naked as We came

Cinder and Smoke

Sunset Soon Forgotten

Teeth in the Grass

Love and Some Verses

Radio War

Each Coming Night

Free Until They Cut Me Down

Fever Dream

Sodom, South Georgia

Passing Afternoon

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Gorgeous writing as always. Are you mixing titles with some of your own lines?

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May 15Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Yes, I am still trying to grab the concept of not bringing in my own words 🤪.

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I am not judging! 😂

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Iron and Wine - very fitting for you, Margaret! And the poem so great! ❤️

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May 15Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Thank you, Fotini! 😊

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Teeth in the grass! I'm gonna have to check that song out. Amazing poem, love it's couplet form.

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May 15Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Thank you, Treasa! It's a great album.

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

THE ISLEY BROTHERS

It was a WARM SUMMER NIGHT in the cabin, and we were just getting ready to SETTLE DOWN with a bottle of Merlot on the couch after an amazing day full of boating on the lake and picking BLACK BERRIES in the forest.

It was then we heard it.

FOOTSTEPS IN THE DARK outside. Someone stalking around the perimeter of the cabin. And it sounded like TROUBLE.

TANGO was already in TEARS and she was mumbling to herself, saying we had to get out, but we were miles from the nearest town and there was NOWHERE TO RUN.

The sounds outside soon got worse, and far more frightening. It seemed almost like the growl of a VACUUM CLEANER starting up at first, but it soon became obvious it was a chainsaw.

My SECRET LOVER screamed, and I jumped so much it made me SPILL THE WINE.

And then the lights went out... 😎

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Oldies but goodies!

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Yes, The Isley Brothers are a fascinating one, because so much of their music has been sampled by hip-hop artists. Songs like 'Footsteps In The Dark' and 'Between The Sheets' would be instantly familiar to people as being the basis of other songs by Ice Cube and Notorious BIG. But they're amazing songs in their own right, and they're definitely one of the best groups that came out of the Motown era. And that produced a lot of great artists! 😎

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If you were there was covered by Wham! Love their music!

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

BON IVER

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Guilt

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Creature fears

towers skinny love.

The kiss, the stroke,

we blindsided "GOD."

The wolves

don't let go.

Faith

re:stacks.

https://youtu.be/A9Tp5fl18Ho?feature=shared

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Every day you come up with a little gem, Treasa!

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Thanks Fontini. I wonder if we'll pick the same J band/artist for tomorrow? See you then.

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

I haven't decided yet for tomorrow. We'll see...

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Wonderful Treasa! The recording is at Air studios in Hampstead right? Wonderful sound!

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Ice Cube

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It was a good day,

can you dig it?

Once upon a time in the projects,

down for whatever,

you know how we do it.

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Gangsta rap made me do it,

get money, spend money, no money,

gotta be insanity.

When I get to heaven

say hi to the bad guy.

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We had to tear this mothafucka up,

Dirty Mack.

I gotta say what up!!

dead homiez.

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Yes this is it! We've entered a new dimension, Ice Cube in the house! Thank you Jonathan!

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May 9Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Exactly the response I was hoping for!

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'I want to be your dog candy,' great line!

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