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Killers

Somebody told me

Boy

Read my mind

Smile like you mean it

For reasons untold

Run for cover

Here with me

Be still

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May 12Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Nice!

Jeeesh, you folks do this every day?

Thanks! I have some new stuff to listen to, thanks to all of you and all this writing & music non-sense.

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Hey PS, some of us do, but you can pop in whenever you can! Great to have you here and thank you!

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Very nice. That is an excellent choice for 'K'... 😎

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Thank you!

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

On top!

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Kraftwerk

Trans-Europe Express

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(this poem quite literally replicates the lyrics of the song, only the song goes on much longer. Call this, then, a 'found' poem, or if you prefer, plagiarism!)

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Love this! Takes guts to make a statement!

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

All aboard the casio keyboard! This is fun fun fun.

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

I can't stop Trans-Europe Express. I am doomed today - this will go on playing on my mind!

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

My sympathies. Kraftwerk will do that. : )

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May 16Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Love it. Brilliant! :-)

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May 10Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

T

Kamasi Washington

(To be honest, the artist wrote most of this in a track listing on an EP)

Road to Self

Prologue

Journey

Stages

Desire

Humility

Knowledge

Perspective

Integrity

Truth

Breathe

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Truly amazing! Gordon thank you!

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Gordon, thank you for introducing me to Kamasi Washington. I am blown away!

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Great music! Glad you like! And wow, a band you did not know? Finally! hahahahaha

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Busted!!!

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Hahaha

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

That is fantastic. That really is the path to self-discovery. And perhaps enlightenment, too... 😎

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May 12Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Well, I wish I wrote it. But it was actually like a Tetris game. The pieces Kamasi sent down I put into place. They just fit

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May 12Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

That's a good way of putting it. Trying to fit these song titles together is a lot like a Tetris game... 😎

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Poem captures the essence of Kamasi Washington, whose music I'm just discovering now, thank you..

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Kronos Quartet

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The Summons

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Totem ancestor

Half-Wolf dances mad in moonlight

High on a rocky ledge.

At the summit

A cool wind is blowing

Echoes of primordial time—

Collected songs where every verse is filled with grief.

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White man sleeps.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vu0IHTIDSn8&ab_channel=KronosQuartet-Topic

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Class!

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

🙏

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Very powerful... 😎

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This is terrific. I love their "Pieces of Africa"

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

KÍla

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Tóg é go bog é

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Dusty wine bottle

the hour before dawn

Take it easy

https://youtu.be/RknDQJtJkOs?feature=shared

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Love Love Love

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

I was attempting a haiku but then got bored of counting. It's sunny, I ain't writing today.

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

I feel you :)

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May 11Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

THE KINKS

One afternoon, on a RAINY DAY IN JUNE, while we were SITTING ON MY SOFA, watching one of those FANCY costume dramas she loved so much, LOLA suddenly announced she wanted to move. To a HOUSE IN THE COUNTRY, like the one we were looking at on TV.

She was tired of working in THE VIDEO SHOP, she said, it was a DEAD END STREET, and it had always been one of her DREAMS to have her own ANIMAL FARM.

We were still naive enough in those YOUNG AND INNOCENT DAYS to believe anything was possible, but we were also barely SURVIVING, and I knew it was going to take a very long time to be able to afford something like that on the wages from a NINE TO FIVE.

So I bought her a copy of the book instead. The one by George Orwell.

She had NOTHING TO SAY for a while, she just pulled a FUNNY FACE, but it was obvious I'd gone too far this time.

It was just meant to be a fun, LOW BUDGET placeholder, but she felt I was mocking her ambitions, and ridiculing her vision of SHANGRI-LA.

We'd clearly reached a point of NO RETURN.

And now she thinks I'm the SCUM OF THE EARTH... 😎

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May 12Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Kansas

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Dust in the wind,

how my soul cries out for you.

Don’t open your eyes,

lonely wind.

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Carry on wayward son,

nobody’s home.

Stay out of trouble —

Angels have fallen.

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Play the game tonight,

the pilgrimage

down the road,

the devil game.

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Fight fire with fire —

Don’t take your love away.

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I had forgotten Dust in the wind, what a gorgeous song, I had no idea of the band either. Now the easy part, what a wonderful poem Jonathan! Absolutely mesmerising how you play the lines. Thank you!

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May 25Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

-: Ode to the Poet: For Kim Gordon . . . :-

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Early in the morning

The poet

Can't help you,

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The canyon,

The eyes, the mouth:

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Everything left

Untitled.

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