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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Good morning blues

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There is a man going around taking names

Alabama bound

There is a man going around taking names

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Where did you sleep last night?

Black Betty

Where did you sleep last night?

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Take this hammer

Black girl

Pick a ball of cotton

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Cotton fields

In New Orleans

When I was a cowboy

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We're in the same boat, brother

The bourgeois blues

We're in the same boat, brother

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Grasshoppers in my pillow

Where did you sleep last night?

Baby don't you love me no more?

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by Leadbelly

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Tali Sarnetzky's avatar

If I had a harmonica, I would take it out and maybe succeed in playing a few bars... I was hopeless on it... Beautiful.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Thank you 🙏 yes a harmonica is essential! Can’t imagine anyone being hopeless with it!

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Tali Sarnetzky's avatar

Sadly, I didn't manage to make much way with it, before having to pawn it. (Sad story from my young and reckless days.) I have since come to the conclusion that I belong with a piano. This movement is most attuned with my body.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

It’s more versatile the piano! Can’t go wrong with it!

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Kevin Maher's avatar

I can hear Johnny Cash singing this in my head. It’s the first line that’s repeated for emphasis that just reminds me of the man in black. Throw in some harmonica and acoustic guitar, and it’s a song!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

How cool that'd be! Didn't Cash sing some Leadbelly songs? I think so.

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Kevin Maher's avatar

He did, but without googling, which I hate doing, they don’t come to mind. ‘When the man comes around’ is a lyric sung by Cash that is now on a loop in my head, featuring in a song from one of his last albums of covers by other artists. Produced by Rick Rubin, who really drew out the very best of his voice and guitar playing. I miss that man. A perfectly flawed, one of a kind.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Great voice, great songs, great interpretation of lyrics for sure. There's another artist I was looking at and realised how many songs he did were by Cash. It's good to see how they worked together and used songs again. Thank you for sharing all this music trivia!

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Wild Lion*esses Pride from Jay's avatar

This poem is made entirely of k.d. lang’s song titles, and the story behind it is mine. It’s the story of falling in love, of losing the person who made me feel most alive, and of being forced—by grief and by a global hush—into a solitude I might never have chosen on my own.

When my partner died at the start of the pandemic, I didn’t know what healing looked like. I only knew the world had quieted, and I had been broken open. What followed was long, strange, and deeply necessary. Her absence became a doorway back to myself.

These titles helped me shape that journey: from ache to light, from detour to devotion.

This is our love story. This is what it became.

—Jay

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k.d. lang – A Song Title Poem

for my love, and the silence that saved me

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A kiss to build a dream on

Once in a while

Constant Craving

So in Love

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Extraordinary Thing

Lifted By Love

It’s Happening with You

When We Collide

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The Consequences of Falling

Three Cigarettes in an Ashtray

Sexuality

Don’t smoke in Bed.

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Because of You

If we never meet Again

Helpless Help Me

Tears of Love’s Recall

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Nowhere To Stand

Pullin’ Back the Reins

Didn’t I

Busy Being Blue

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Shadowland

Rose Garden

Diet of Strange Places

High Time for A Detour

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I Wonder

Maybe

The Joker

Calling All Angels

Wash me clean

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Coming Home

Infinite and Unforeseen

Or was I

So shall it be

Hallelujah

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Sorry for your loss Jay. K D Lang, what a gorgeous voice she has. I didn’t know she’d done covers of Hallelujah and three cigarettes in an ashtray! That girl can sing. Love your initial stanza in this song title poem.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

I understand it's difficult when you lose someone close to you no matter the circumstances. You're excited to talk about your experience and relationship. This is too much information on a page that's about a music challenge and you keep pushing my boundaries for what this space is for. Please be considerate to other readers who may not condone infidelity, bigamy and/or extramarital relations. You include other people and third parties in your comment who are not here to give their view. That's uncomfortable and unfair on them. While I'm not liable for what you share and how much you include intimate details, I kindly suggest that out of self respect, consider what you share over the internet. This page is not about people's sex lives or adultery. This is about songs and music. Be considerate, be respectful.

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Tali Sarnetzky's avatar

Wow, so moving... I have tears in my eyes. Hugs from here, my friend. X

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Wild Lion*esses Pride from Jay's avatar

Thank you

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Francesca Bossert's avatar

Oh, Jay, you gave me goosebumps. Yes, the first stanza did it. I'm not familiar with her music, although of course I know some of the songs you mentioned. I find it fascinating that we all listen to such different music!

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Wild Lion*esses Pride from Jay's avatar

Thank You Francesca. Yes the varsity of artists presented is truly astonishing

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Darienne's avatar

Oh the “constant craving”. And that last verse stunned me with its simple and sincere beauty.

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Wild Lion*esses Pride from Jay's avatar

Thank you

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Kevin Maher's avatar

Night comes on

You want it darker

My oh my

I’m your man

Here it is

You know who I am

Tonight will be fine

Thanks for the dance

Leonard Cohen

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Tali Sarnetzky's avatar

I think he would have liked it, Kevin. You kept the depth and flow of his natural rhythm with these titles. I love what you did here.

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Kevin Maher's avatar

Thanks. So many songs to choose from, but I just tried to capture the essence of the man. Wise. Open. No place too dark,or bright, for him to explore. By someone’s side. Along for the ride, or leading the way. When he last played Ireland, about 10 years ago, he greeted the crowd by saying ‘hello everyone, it’s good to be back. It’s been over twenty years since I last played here..just a crazy kid with a dream!’

😂😂😎💚

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

As simple as that, crazy dream, small steps, little kid! How lucky you were to have seen him. You want it darker is a great title and lyric. Glad it found a place in your poem.

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Tali Sarnetzky's avatar

Very true. Somtimes I listen to Everybody Knows, and marvel at all the little things and hints and smart jabs hidden between every word... Zen master at work.

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Kevin Maher's avatar

That song is a masterpiece. I’m going to have a Leonard Cohen soundtrack for today. Beginning with that track.

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Tali Sarnetzky's avatar

lovely. I'll meet you between the notes :)

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Kevin Maher's avatar

Everybody knows the boat is leaking

Everybody knows the captain lied…

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Darienne's avatar

Thanks for the lyric dance Kevin.

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Lisa Andradez's avatar

Led Zeppelin

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I can't quit you baby

Dazed and confused

Black dog

Rock n roll

You shook me

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How many more times

All my love

Fool in the rain

Nobody's fault but mine

Tea for one

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

You create wonderful sounds with your poems. Internal rhymes? Is that a term? Thank you Lisa!

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Lisa Andradez's avatar

Thanks, I'm not sure if that is a term or not, but I'll take it!! 😀

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Passionate and powerful singer!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Internal rhyme is a term! Take it!

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Darienne's avatar

Hello STC L day!

Had to be another Scot again today…

May 12 is Lloyd Cole

Are you ready to be heartbroken?

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Ice cream girl

Perfect skin

Jennifer she said

Let’s get lost

Like lovers do

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Can’t get arrested

The young idealists

The sea and the sand

Double happiness

Lost weekend

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My other life

Minor character

Seen the future

Mister wrong

Love your wife

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No more love songs

Half of everything

Lonely mile

Don’t look back

You’re a big girl now

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

His music never sticks. I remember early MTV days always playing his music but I never understood it. Thank you for this poem, it all makes sense now years later. Thank you Darienne.

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Darienne's avatar

Lloyd and I are pleased to have reached you😊

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

😁🤣😃

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LennArrrt's avatar

Reports on the Horizon

Perfect Spot

I'll Be Waiting

At the Rooftop

Coffeeshop

Above the Clouds

~ Salam

SongTitles af Lisa Nordström

📜 Poem af bARdisT LennArrrt

🎧 (all trax in this SongTitlePoem are incl. in this playlist)

https://open.spotify.com/playlist/3IaTmQCEaowgTjwQ5TDDOH?si=dkVB8IWqQVmXm1ypQRulhg&pi=fcnCHZ8YQBuzE

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Francesca Bossert's avatar

This is a lovely one! Again, I don't know the singer. What is wrong with me?!!!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

I've never heard of Lisa either and checking her youtube songs there are not played too much which is a shame. Lovely poem and thank you Lennart for introducing us to unknown and especially Swedish artists. Much appreciated!

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LennArrrt's avatar

Oh nothing wrong with U ~ there’s just so much Great Music outthere we just haven't found yet. Keep searching 🎶

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

100% agreed!

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Darienne's avatar

Let’s all meet up at that coffeeshop - love this Lenn, simple intricacies transporting us there.

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Darienne's avatar

That’s kind of how it seemed in my head.

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Tali Sarnetzky's avatar

I still remember the first time I heard this band, on the radio, on a day I was sick and stayed home from school. Funny how some things stick in the mind...

This is a tribute to Living Color.

Someone like you.

Time's up!

I want to know

Broken hearts,

Desperate people.

Under cover of darkness,

Love rears its ugly head,

Never satisfied.

Go away.

Leave it alone.

Mind your own business.

I want to know

Song without sin

in your name.

Holy roller--

Lost halo...

Someone like you.

Two sides.

That's what you taught me.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Love Living Colour! Met them years ago and saw a gig in a small venue. Those anthems live are the experience. Thanks for the reminder. I think I wrote one on them last year. Thank you Tali.

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Tali Sarnetzky's avatar

Oh wow! I would love to see them live. Must have been fantastic!

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Kate's avatar

L is for Lana del Ray

Fucked my way to the top

Million dollar man

Sweet fingertips

Text book, if you lie down with me

Old money ultra violence

This is what makes us girls

Lucky ones

Hope is a dangerous thing for a woman like me to have - but I have it

Money power glory

Don’t let me be misunderstood

God knows I tried

Love

Lust for life

Religion

Swan song 24

God bless America and all the beautiful women in it

Lolita, Carmen, Margaret, sweet Carolina

Pretty when you cry

Beautiful if you lie down with me

This is what makes us girls

Lucky ones

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Mindblowing! Thank you Kate!

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Francesca Bossert's avatar

I love this one, Kate. You really made a story, and I know how hard it is. I love Lana!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

LIONEL RICHIE (Poem)

TELL ME, YOU ARE, STILL IN LOVE,

TRULY, NOTHING ELSE MATTERS... 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Short and sweet! A classic with Lionel! I didn't know the nothing else matters song.

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