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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Fireflies

Summer Cannibals

Gloria

People have the power

paths that cross

beneath the southern cross

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Dancing Barefoot

Looking for you

Ain't that strange

Gone again

My Madrigal

Mother Rose

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Because the night

Everybody wants to rule the world

Beneath the southern cross

Frederick

Father Figure

Smells like teen spirit.

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Songs sung by @Patti Smith

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Darienne's avatar

Back to Scotland for a P poem!

P is for Paolo Nutini

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Numpty (a word in Scots for fool)

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Caledonia

Auld lang syne

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You and I

Looking for something

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Growing up beside you

Coming up easy

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New shoes

Million faces

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These streets

Take me take mine

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Through the echoes

Northern skies

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Simple things

Pencil full of lead

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Over and over

White lies

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Last request

Pull it from my heart

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No sympathy

Now who’s the fool

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Ok break our hearts Darienne!

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Prince

I would die for you

Hot thing

I wanna be your lover

Darling Nickie

Nothing compares to you

You got that look

Kiss

The most beautiful girl in the world

I wish you heaven

Baby, I'm a star

Play that funky music

Let's go crazy

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Love this Kathleen

"Baby, I'm a star

Play that funky music

Let's go crazy"

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Thank you, this was so much fun

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Glad to hear it!

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Thank you, this was fun

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LennArrrt's avatar

Love that Funky Music 🎸

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Kevin Maher's avatar

Rock on, mo chãra!

I had a little listen to Prince, and Tom Petty, etc, a couple of times, and then just put a playlist of his songs , on Spotify , popped in my earplugs, and potted some plants while busting a few moves in my yard. Each song brought back the time of their release. Sign of the times rings as true today as when it exploded back in the 80’s.

So, you have the Celtic blood coursing through your veins, same as myself. And a name to match. Clancy and Devlin are very popular surnames up around our east coast. I’m down in Cork, myself. The Peoples Republic of Cork, as we like to call it. The real capital of Ireland. The Dubs don’t like it. But we don’t care!

Wishing you and yours a peaceful, relaxing weekend. God bless.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Ireland is a wonderful country!

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Kevin Maher's avatar

It’s not a bad part of the planet to spend your days. I’ve travelled and worked all over the world, but eventually returned, and as luck would have it, I was in exactly the right place, at the right time, as family issues needed to be resolved. And that is an ongoing project, with little ones dependent upon me. So right now, despite my wanderlust, I would not want to be anywhere else. And we are experiencing a mini heat wave these last few weeks, so the general mood has improved dramatically! It’s a rare occurrence. So I’m enjoying every minute. I’m off to west Cork tomorrow, heading in the Kerry direction. The scenery, and especially the beaches there, are breathtakingly beautiful. On a par with any I’ve seen anywhere. When the sun shines! Haha!

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

Thank you and same to you, Kevin

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Kevin Maher's avatar

Let’s go crazy!

I think that happened to me yonks ago!!😂

I love this, Kathleen. Prince was so talented, and his lyrics are off the charts great!

He would have approved of your piece, and then casually thrown a six minute guitar solo in between ‘I wish you heaven’, and ‘Baby I’m a star’!

We shall never see the like of him again. And now, having read your poem for the second or third time, I’m going to have a Prince themed evening here in Ireland.

Beginning with his taking part in the star studded ensemble onstage to honour the late George Harrison. Prince was peeved to have not been included in a top one hundred list of all time great guitarist list, compiled by the same people that organised the George Harrison bash. So, when he closed out ‘ While my guitar gently weeps’, surrounded by some of the worlds best guitarists, left everyone at the venue, including those onstage with him, open mouthed and in awe at the sound he produced on guitar. I recommend any Prince fan, to check it out on YouTube. I’m putting it on right now, and thanks again for sharing. Brilliantly done!

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Kathleen Hobbs's avatar

You're welcome. He definitely left us too soon. I loved every single one of his songs every time they come on I dance around the house like a crazy lady.

Yes, and I remember while my guitar gently weeps.

Thanks from Draper, Utah

So I see you're from Ireland that's where my family started last name Clancy/Devlin. Rock on.

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Tali Sarnetzky's avatar

These two gentlemen created music that offered me many stories to imagine, and were my safe place in high school.

This is a tribute to The Pet Shop Boys.

Yesterday, when I was mad,

A different point of view--

liberation.

To face the truth,

Love is the law.

Say it to me

Pazzo!

Inner sanctum--

somewhere--

Dreamland.

Together,

Vocal

Winner.

Hold on!

Breathing space.

Give it a go.

Everything means something...

Left to my own devices--

Forever in love,

My head is spinning.

Jealousy

So hard.

Love comes quickly.

What have I done to deserve this?

How can you expect to be

Taken seriously?

My October symphony.

Did you see me coming?

Leaving?

I want to wake up.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Oh I would've never thought there was a poetic element to the pet shop boys! And the opening lines "Yesterday, when I was mad,

A different point of view--

liberation.

To face the truth,

Love is the law." Love, liberation, truth and a different point of view. What a story you tell here, thank you Tali!

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Tali Sarnetzky's avatar

Thank you X

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Gordon Schenck's avatar

Poco

Kind woman

Let's dance tonight

I'll leave it up to you

Just call my name

Make me smile

From the inside

Angel - C'Mon

Keep on believin'

Just for me and you

How will you feel tonight

Sittin' on a fence

Starin' at the sky

While you're on your way

Win or lose

Cry no more

You better think twice

I can see everything

Don't let it pass by

Anyway bye bye

Just in case it happens, yes indeed

Go and say goodbye

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Another band that's new for me. These lines follow one another so well, perfect flow. Thank you Gordon.

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Tali Sarnetzky's avatar

Love it!

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Kate's avatar

Something swoony this way comes …

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Lisa Andradez's avatar

Paul Weller

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Sunflower

Wild wood

Always there

All I wanna do (Is be with you)

You do something to me

When your garden's overgrown

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Trees

Aim high

No tears to cry

Grasp and still connect

Amongst butterflies

Break the night with colour

What else is there?

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Days go by

Time passes...

Wishin on a star

Long hot summer

Blink and you'll miss it

Come on / Let's go

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

When poetry just sings to you! Beautiful Lisa.

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Ahh, The Modfather! That's a fantastic choice. So many great songs there... 😎👍

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Kate's avatar

P is for pseudo echo

His eyes

Listening

From the shore

Suddenly silent

See through

Stranger in me

I will be you

Don’t go

Lies are nothing

Fooled again

Fighting the tide

Try girl

I ask you why

Tell me

Caught imagination

Eye of the storm

Runaways

Loosen the rope

Dancing till midnight

Destination unknown

Funky town

His eyes

Listening

Take on the world

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

The pseudo echo sound between sea and shoreline is a lovely dialogue Kate. Wow! Beautiful work and does this dialogue go into inner monologue at some point? His Eyes Listening repetition works very well!

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Kate's avatar

I feel like she has found a kindred spirit who “gets her” but she has doubts, and worries he sees her chameleon-nature; so she keeps him distant but he’s a constant, patient and compassionate, so she relents.

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Darienne's avatar

“His eyes

Listening”

There is something so powerful in this repeated imagery. Loved this Kate🫶🏻

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

PEARL JAM (Poem)

DEAD MAN, RUNNING,

QUICK ESCAPE, IN THE MOONLIGHT,

IN HIDING, IN MY TREE,

ALL NIGHT,

SEVEN O'CLOCK, LIGHTNING BOLT,

FORCE OF NATURE,

OFF HE GOES,

THE END... 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Love this!Seven o clock, lightning bolt is a great line!

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Chris J. Franklin's avatar

Thanks! It's always incredible how often you can find connections between these song titles, and make stories out of them. Haha... 😎

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Very true!

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Kevin Maher's avatar

Before night falls

In your eyes

The promise of shadows

The rhythm of heat

Modern love

Waiting for the big one

Love to be loved

Come back to me

That voice again

The feeling begins

Lay your hands on me

Kiss that frog

Peter Gabriel.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Another class act! Thank you Kevin! In your eyes, all of this heat, promise and love. Wonderful poem!

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Kevin Maher's avatar

You like?

I’ve written the last few by scanning the track list on albums, and just taking a couple of titles that resonate, and building on that . Each one taking no more than 5 minutes to jot down, type up, and send. Just letting it flow, and press go. Before you second guess yourself and ruin that initial hook line.. if you follow me? I have not attempted to write poems since I was a teenager. I’m more into short storylines, little snippets, or a mish mash of scenarios that occurred in my life while working or travelling or whatever. Crippled by procrastination and imposter syndrome, but the more I read on this particularly wonderful space, the more I realise that almost everyone suffers from the same sort of stuff as I do.

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

You may not be alone in many experiences you encounter… but many go through it on their own. Writing and songs connect people. And yes, song title poems don’t need to take long time to assemble.

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Kevin Maher's avatar

I find it best to go quickly, with a title or two setting the tone, and then let some others fill in the rest. I’m not making much sense here, not even to myself, as it’s hard to articulate how songs, especially the ones we know well and can transport us back to periods in our lives… good and bad and sometimes oh so ugly.. affect us. And, of course, each one brings back unique memories to us, or can unite us in our recollection.

The song title poem challenge is a cracking idea. It’s been a blast for me, at least. Reading other people’s take on bands I’m into. Introducing me to others for the first time. And met some like minded, warm and welcoming people along the way.

Thanks for inviting me, and the effort you have put in to facilitate us all. Happy Friday!

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

It’s lovely to hear you share that. It’s a little intense in May as there’s a challenge each day! It then moves on to monthly challenge for the rest of the year. Thank you for immersing in it and being part of the conversation.

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Kevin Maher's avatar

The pleasure is all mine, Writer Pilgrim by so Elite. I’m a newbie, and your encouragement and support made me feel really welcome. What a lovely little group to be able to interact with every day, and it’s all down to you setting the stage and leading by example. You certainly brought me out of my shell!

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LennArrrt's avatar

Blown Leaves

Nightfall Dancer

Sounds Heard From The Moon

Throughout The Night

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At Dawn

First Buds

Restlessly Towards

Bloom

SongTitles af Park Jiha

📜 Poem af bARdisT LennArrrt

🎧

https://open.spotify.com/playlist/2HurpMYA2x8k2Es7a0wM0W?si=xilKkB25SuigFLkd4omtnw

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Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Beautiful two stanzas one about movement in dance and the second perhaps of the slow dance of a flower. Park Jiha has mesmerizing music, so nice to see her here in your song title poem.

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LennArrrt's avatar

🪻

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Kate's avatar

Mmmm imagery …. Very nice LennArrt 💕

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