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Queen Latifah

Ladies first

Fix me, Jesus

Come into my house

I know where I've been

As time goes by

He's everything

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Great choice!!!! Love Queen Latifah.

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Thank you!

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

I take a bow!

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May 17·edited May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Chose Queen this week, and like the Kurt Cobain/Nirvana one, wanted to write something in the style of an epitaph, for Freddie. I was such a massive fan from around 10-13, and when he died it was such a sad moment. I got to stay up super late with my parents and watch the Tribute concert for him which was live telecast all over the world, and lots of my fav bands at the time did tributes (Guns n' Roses, Metallica, Def Leppard, etc.) and lots of other musicians who I would eventually become fans of as my tastes matured (Annie Lennox, David Bowie, George Michael, Elton John, etc.). Thanks for all the music Freddie!

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-: epitaph for Freddie Mercury :-

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put out the fire,

it's late!

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the night comes down,

rain must fall—

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in the lap of the gods

the prophet's song

rides the wild wind,

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nevermore

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Absolutely beautiful. Am pleased you chose Queen and you've written a beautiful piece for Freddie! I remember that concert I remember Annie's outfit and her duet with Bowie and of course George Michael's version of Somebody to Love! Your piece brings back memories.

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Thanks so much - good to know I did him a little justice. Omg - yes, Annie’s outfit was amazing! And yeah, I think George Michael surprised everyone - definitely one of the best performances of the night. So good.

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He didn’t surprise me! I am a huge fan. I was very proud. I remember Brian May’s face as he hits those high notes. Seal of approval right there!

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Love that! Yeah, I was a bit young, and so didn't really know him. Blew me away!

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

beautiful, just perfect.

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May 20Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Aw thanks so much Treasa! ☺️

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

That's another really great tribute. It's heartbreaking that Freddie and George are both gone now. They had so much more to give... 😎

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May 19Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Cheers Chris. Yeah, agreed! 💜

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May 17·edited May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Queensryche, top-notch hard rock/metal/progressive band often referred to as a "thinking man's band". Many know the band for the epic album, Operation: Mindcrime and for the hit power ballad/lullaby, "Silent Lucidity". I forego using this song as a title but include 3 sets of others as featured song title pieces. Enjoy!

Take Hold of the Flame

Walk in the Shadows

Speak

Child of Fire

Anybody Listening?

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I am I

Dis con nec ted

Doin’ Fine

Out of Mind

The Right Side of My Mind

Losing Myself

I Believe

The Lie

The Needle Lies

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Broken

Real World

A World Without

One and Only

You

All I Want

One More Time

Just Us

Anytime/Anywhere

In this Light

Nocturnal Light

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

These are all great - especially love the first one. Has a tanka vibe. Very nice.

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Love it! The title alone is a poem in itself.

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Welcome Marinarena! Great to have you here and thank you for your song title poem. Great job with Queensryche.

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Three great ones there. Very nice... 😎

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

QUEEN

LAZING ON A SUNDAY AFTERNOON, I suddenly had the idea that I wanted to put on a musical version of 'BRIGHTON ROCK', based on the 2010 movie, with an all female cast of Mods and Rockers.

We quickly put out an ad CALLING ALL GIRLS, and soon had a talented cast assembled who were ready for their TIME TO SHINE.

We were UNDER PRESSURE to make a good return for our investors and ensure the production wasn't a MISFIRE, so we worked THROUGH THE NIGHT for several weeks until we were certain we were going to TEAR IT UP and have STAYING POWER.

But even though we were all united by ONE VISION, there was one thing we had overlooked.

In our quest for authenticity, half the audience passed out on opening night, due to the fumes from the Vespa and Lambretta scooters we had running on stage.

Hopefully, after we've settled the law suits, we'll be able to get the PARTY started once again.

Because after all, THE SHOW MUST GO ON... 😎

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Brilliant. A show to die for, literally!

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Haha! Thanks! They definitely needed to pay a lot of compensation out after that performance, for sure... 😎

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How many Vespas and Lambrettas? People will be asking for their money back. Don't recognize all the tunes here so have some homework to do. Great finish!

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Haha! Thanks! Probably about ten scooters or so. Not too many. I mean, 'Miss Saigon' manage to get a helicopter on stage, but this was probably only a small theatre... 😎

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Queens of the Stone Age

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Long Slow Goodbye

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If only

You would know

God is in the radio

Turnin’ on the screw

In my head.

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Gonna leave you,

Little sister.

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This lullaby,

Skin on skin

Tangled up in plaid,

Another love song

In the fade.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HOlAUAlM4ys&ab_channel=QueensOfTheStoneAge-Topic

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Freakin' great, God turnin' the screw, love it!

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Fabulous!

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Listening to Queens of the Stone Age now!

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

"If only you would know, God is in the radio." Profound... 😎

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Perfect line.

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May 20Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Beautiful

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May 21Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Thank you, Jonathan!

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

QUEENS OF THE STONE AGE / QUEEN

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Support Act to Living

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The sky is falling / spread your wings

Go with the flow / ride the wild wind

Misfit love / sheer heart attack

Straight jacket fitting / I want to break free.

Emotion sickness/ pain is so close to pleasure

Negative space / under pressure

Suture up your future / who wants to live forever

…like clockwork / the show must go on

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I wasn’t there but remember watching on TV in my Live Aid t-shirt.

https://youtu.be/C2nOXhUPUuU?si=vRJf7K_-nYCx5vKQ

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

super creative!

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Thanks so much Marinarena :)

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Treasa! What was that? Great combo, a battle of the bands song title poetry dialogue. Brilliant matching.

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

I couldn't decide on which Q to go with so did a mash up of the two. If it were a battle of the bands, Freddy would win. Every. Damn. Day.

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It's beautiful and reads beautifully. As if the songs were made to match each other, at least their titles. Freddie wins, agree!

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

OK, you left us miles behind today, Treasa!!!

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Haha, thanks Fotini. See you tomoRrow :)

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She certainly did! We’re standing here wondering how on earth did that happen? We need to up our game now with 9 days to go.

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May 17Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

Ahh, a mash up! That's a very clever idea. It works well... 😎

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May 30Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

The Quizlings

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I am the robotman,

come join me

in the outerspace of my dreams

you beautiful people.

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How hot does it have to get

until the haters start to love?

Who do you think you are

sunrise rider?

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I’ve been down this road

crazy shaking angry.

It doesn’t do me no good,

Mrs. Flash Gordon.

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Won’t you be my neighbor

all ye who labor?

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Where is this band from? Do they take their name from the Nazi collaborator and Norwegian traitor?

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May 30Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

The principal members of the band are the offspring of quiz show hosts.

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I see. I got too serious, thought it was a reference to Quisling.

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May 30Liked by Writer Pilgrim by So Elite

It's also fictitious :) I didn't realize I was rushing in where angels fear to tread.

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